Beginning and End

[Dan12345]

Maybe this is the beginning, maybe this is the end...
A fragile miracle time chose to lend
We are two heartbeats on borrowed air,
Learning eternity in a single stare......

Life is a river that won't stay still,
Carving its way by fate's quiet will
Death is an ocean, patient and wide,
Waiting in silence on the other side

Yet here in the space where our pulses meet,
Forever feels sudden, tender and sweet
Your name on my lips outlives my breath,
A vow whispered softly in the face of death...

If i must fade into earth and sky,
Let it be loving you.. that is how i'll die
For when all of time has come and gone,
It's your soul my soul leans on..............

 

[QTie]

Maybe this is the beginning, maybe this is the end...
A fragile miracle time chose to lend
We are two heartbeats on borrowed air,
Learning eternity in a single stare......

Life is a river that won't stay still,
Carving its way by fate's quiet will
Death is an ocean, patient and wide,
Waiting in silence on the other side

Yet here in the space where our pulses meet,
Forever feels sudden, tender and sweet
Your name on my lips outlives my breath,
A vow whispered softly in the face of death...

If i must fade into earth and sky,
Let it be loving you.. that is how i'll die
For when all of time has come and gone,
It's your soul my soul leans on..............

Sweet !

 

[SevenMinutesBeforeGoodbye]

@Dan12345 never knew , this Tharki could write so good !

Keep it up, post more !!

 

[Equilibrium]

Maybe this is the beginning, maybe this is the end...
A fragile miracle time chose to lend
We are two heartbeats on borrowed air,
Learning eternity in a single stare......

Life is a river that won't stay still,
Carving its way by fate's quiet will
Death is an ocean, patient and wide,
Waiting in silence on the other side

Yet here in the space where our pulses meet,
Forever feels sudden, tender and sweet
Your name on my lips outlives my breath,
A vow whispered softly in the face of death...

If i must fade into earth and sky,
Let it be loving you.. that is how i'll die
For when all of time has come and gone,
It's your soul my soul leans on..............

Nice one lover boy

 

[Tejuu_1324]

Nice

 

[Smritii]

Maybe this is the beginning, maybe this is the end...
A fragile miracle time chose to lend
We are two heartbeats on borrowed air,
Learning eternity in a single stare......

Life is a river that won't stay still,
Carving its way by fate's quiet will
Death is an ocean, patient and wide,
Waiting in silence on the other side

Yet here in the space where our pulses meet,
Forever feels sudden, tender and sweet
Your name on my lips outlives my breath,
A vow whispered softly in the face of death...

If i must fade into earth and sky,
Let it be loving you.. that is how i'll die
For when all of time has come and gone,
It's your soul my soul leans on..............

So nice too good

 

[Soul22]

Maybe this is the beginning, maybe this is the end...
A fragile miracle time chose to lend
We are two heartbeats on borrowed air,
Learning eternity in a single stare......

Life is a river that won't stay still,
Carving its way by fate's quiet will
Death is an ocean, patient and wide,
Waiting in silence on the other side

Yet here in the space where our pulses meet,
Forever feels sudden, tender and sweet
Your name on my lips outlives my breath,
A vow whispered softly in the face of death...

If i must fade into earth and sky,
Let it be loving you.. that is how i'll die
For when all of time has come and gone,
It's your soul my soul leans on..............

Wow...nice ha... spanking Dan for this beautiful poem

 

[Incomplete]

Maybe this is the beginning, maybe this is the end...
A fragile miracle time chose to lend
We are two heartbeats on borrowed air,
Learning eternity in a single stare......

Life is a river that won't stay still,
Carving its way by fate's quiet will
Death is an ocean, patient and wide,
Waiting in silence on the other side

Yet here in the space where our pulses meet,
Forever feels sudden, tender and sweet
Your name on my lips outlives my breath,
A vow whispered softly in the face of death...

If i must fade into earth and sky,
Let it be loving you.. that is how i'll die
For when all of time has come and gone,
It's your soul my soul leans on..............

Woahhh !! so nice

 

[Dan12345]

Sweet !

Thanks cutuuuuu

 

[Dan12345]

@Dan12345 never knew , this Tharki could write so good !

Keep it up, post more !!

Yepp sure, thanks

 

[Dan12345]

Nice one lover boy

Hehe. Thanks chirkut

 

[Dan12345]

Nice

Thanks girl

 

[Dan12345]

So nice too good

Thanks teacher

 

[Dan12345]

Wow...nice ha... spanking Dan for this beautiful poem

Thanks. And spanking you back

 

[Dan12345]

Woahhh !! so nice

Thanks buddy

 

[Preyathna]

This is either eternal love…
or the world’s most dramatic crush...

P.S.. Good one though XD

 

[Dan12345]

This is either eternal love…
or the world’s most dramatic crush...

P.S.. Good one though XD

Hehe

 

[RedWinee]

Maybe this is the beginning, maybe this is the end...
A fragile miracle time chose to lend
We are two heartbeats on borrowed air,
Learning eternity in a single stare......

Life is a river that won't stay still,
Carving its way by fate's quiet will
Death is an ocean, patient and wide,
Waiting in silence on the other side

Yet here in the space where our pulses meet,
Forever feels sudden, tender and sweet
Your name on my lips outlives my breath,
A vow whispered softly in the face of death...

If i must fade into earth and sky,
Let it be loving you.. that is how i'll die
For when all of time has come and gone,
It's your soul my soul leans on..............

Let the heavens bear witness, let the restless world fall still.
Let eternity carve your sacred name into my heart.
For even when silence swallows all that we knew,
The universe itself will rise to speak your name.
Let us burn together—two immortal stars that refuse to fade.

 

[Dan12345]

Let the heavens bear witness, let the restless world fall still.
Let eternity carve your sacred name into my heart.
For even when silence swallows all that we knew,
The universe itself will rise to speak your name.
Let us burn together—two immortal stars that refuse to fade.

And if the heavens are truly watching,
let them see how gently your name lives in my heart too.

 

[BlueFlames_]

Maybe this is the beginning, maybe this is the end...
A fragile miracle time chose to lend
We are two heartbeats on borrowed air,
Learning eternity in a single stare......

Life is a river that won't stay still,
Carving its way by fate's quiet will
Death is an ocean, patient and wide,
Waiting in silence on the other side

Yet here in the space where our pulses meet,
Forever feels sudden, tender and sweet
Your name on my lips outlives my breath,
A vow whispered softly in the face of death...

If i must fade into earth and sky,
Let it be loving you.. that is how i'll die
For when all of time has come and gone,
It's your soul my soul leans on..............

Good effort but it does sound cliche to me. Keep writing!