Beginning and End

[Dan12345]

Good effort but it does sound cliche to me. Keep writing!

You would never know

 

[IMatrixI]

The wrong peeps would always get a cliche...but there is a glitch in their life.
You chill mere bhai
Everything's in the right spot
Just don't think too much
N let it

 

[balbharti]

Hi

 

[Gorgeous_Aura]

Borrowed breathe. Thats deep . Way to go @Dan12345

 

[Dan12345]

Borrowed breathe. Thats deep . Way to go @Dan12345

Hehe thanks darling

 

[Missmeadow]

Maybe this is the beginning, maybe this is the end...
A fragile miracle time chose to lend
We are two heartbeats on borrowed air,
Learning eternity in a single stare......

Life is a river that won't stay still,
Carving its way by fate's quiet will
Death is an ocean, patient and wide,
Waiting in silence on the other side

Yet here in the space where our pulses meet,
Forever feels sudden, tender and sweet
Your name on my lips outlives my breath,
A vow whispered softly in the face of death...

If i must fade into earth and sky,
Let it be loving you.. that is how i'll die
For when all of time has come and gone,
It's your soul my soul leans on..............

Incredible talents!!Your writing carries a depth that really stands out

 

[Dan12345]

Incredible talents!!Your writing carries a depth that really stands out

I'm grateful for your words